After a great Healthy School Week, Class 4 have returned to poetry and experimenting with form. We have been creating list poems. A list poem is one of the oldest forms of poetry. The same word or words or class of words start each line. Each line is different, so that the lines create a different effect on their own.
'The Door' attributed to a Czech poet Miroslav Hulob translated by Ian Milner and George Theiner
The Door by Class 4
Go and open the door
Maybe outside there's a
planet or a solar system
a rocket,
or a sun.
Go and open the door
Maybe children playing
Maybe you'll see a house
or a room,
or a photograph
of a family.
Go and open the door
Even if there's only a shadow
even if there's
a cold breeze
even if
nothing is there,
go and open the door.
At least
there'll be
a draught
Friend
If you'd be my friend
I'd paint myself gold
live in a hold,
ride up to space
eat toothpaste,
stay up all night
have a fright,
share my last sweet
have nothing to eat,
and smile without end
if you'd be my friend.
Joe W-C. and Max W.
Friend
If you'd be my friend,
I'd paint myself cream
live in a dream,
call myself Fred
never go to bed,
swear at my dad
always be bad,
live a good life
swallow a knife,
and smile without end
if you'd be my friend
Darcy Toms and Josh Evans
2 comments:
I really enjoyed the list poems because its always fun to learn
i really enjoyed learning about poems because it's Mrs James faviote poems and they are my faviote as well and they are good fun.
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