You!
Your ears are like fans for blowing fire.
In groups we have tried to write our own animal simile poems. We have written one here. Can you guess what animal it is?
You!
Your tail is like a victorian whip.
You!
Your face is like a mysterious African mask.
You!
Your mouth is like a mouse's hole.
You!
Your belly is like white jelly.
You!
Your claws are like a vampire's fangs.
You!
Your legs are like a blurry photo.
Your face is like a mysterious African mask.
You!
Your mouth is like a mouse's hole.
You!
Your belly is like white jelly.
You!
Your claws are like a vampire's fangs.
You!
Your legs are like a blurry photo.
You!
Your spots are like a soldier's camouflage uniform.
27 comments:
Hi Class 4!
Is it a cheetah?
Yes, it is!
I really enjoyed doing poems my favourite one was the you poem.
We have really enjoyed all the poems in the last couple of weeks
i liked doing a this poem i hope we do anouther one
It has been fun doing poems in
literacy
We're glad you've found the literacy fun Preston!
I really enjoy writing poetry and i really enjoyed writing the YOU! poem
Love the poems and the blogs class 4, but at the moment class 3 has a better page!! Keep at it!
I loved doing the poems and enjoyed all of them, especially the rapidly poem. It was great fun writing them.
are wish we could do more poetry for a couple more days. I shown my anuty helan today and she enjoyed it.
I made one for the ear. your ear is like a question mark. i hope we get to do another one during year 4 this one was the best poem we done.my favorite one on the you poem was you spots were like a soldiers camoflaged uniform.the one that Caitlin made up.
I really enjoyed doing our poems my favourite poem was the You! one Caitlins idea was really clever! I love poetry i wish we could do it FOREVER!!
My sister liked reading the You! poem. I did as well she thinks its a cheetah is it right???
wow class 4 i love the two poems i hope you put anouther one on this blog keep up the good work!!!!!!!
I loved doing our poems in literacy they were really fun to do. I enjoyed every bit of the poetry. My favourite poem we did was the Rapidly poem I loved working with my partener Chloe Barrett she had great ideas!
I really liked doing the poems. I liked doing the rapidly poem best but did enjoy all of the others as well.
I don't know what the animal is but its a great poem and I think class 4 are doing great in literacy!!
I really enjoyed doing poem's in literacy.My favourite is the you poem.I wish we can do more poetry in literacy!
I love doing work on poetry really enjoyed doing the AS ,AS , AS it was so fun doing it as a class i wish we can do way more poetry because it is so fun!!
It was really fun doing work on poetry my favoite poem was AS,AS,.AS it was really really good i wish we could do way more work on poetry BECAUSE IT IS REALLY REALLY FUN!!
I really loved doing work on poetry it was so FUN so FUN i want to do more way more stuff on poetry but now im looking forward to doing ouru new unit of work which is poems from Australia.
well done green group my mum gesed a cheater.
hey iys beth go purple group u rock we can do it can't we!!!!
I really enjoyed doing the you poem it was really fun to do I loved caitlins idea!!! Caitlin's one of my best friends and she makes me laugh she is really smart at literacy!!!!!!!!
I LOVED DOING THE SIMILE POEMS
Hello. I like the poem you have written together.
I would very much like a copy of the original poem "You" in the Igbo dialect of Nigeria.
Are you able to email me a copy?
carla@hendonet.com
I would very much appreciate it.
Thanks,
Carla
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